It was time to go to bed.The cabin was sooooo small.
Me and my friends were playing with our torches.
The outside light was on which made our cabin really bright. Mrs Evers came in and growled really loud at us.
We all were scared after that. We all didn't want to go to sleep. We looked at the window and we saw a flash.
Great I whispered there's lightning. It scared us a whole lot more. Bang. Suddenly the lights went out. And then a tree set on fire and set the ground on fire! We got soooooo worried...By Sarah
Sarah, I really liked your story because of the sudden action of the 'Bang!' It was effective having the 'Bang' so big! From Charlotte L :)
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